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You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes. Write a letter to the community college. In your letter: • say which advertisement you are answering • describe which course(s) you want to teach, and what it/they would be about • explain why you would be a suitable teacher

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you with regard to a recent job advertisement for a lecturer position, job reference number: 12345, and I would like to take
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 role in your esteemed community college. According to the advertised job description, your college has opened a new
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 management department for the adult learning night classes, and you require someone who can teach
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 Governance and
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 Budget. Fortunately, I am a qualified
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 management professional and both these subjects are my key areas of interest. Being a PMP certified
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 Manager with more than 10 years of corporate experience, I would be able to add significant value to these courses by providing
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, planning is one of my greatest strengths and I feel happy to think about
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designing the course
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. I hope you would
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 my application favourably. Thank you for your time. Yours faithfully, John Smith
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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