When designing a building, the most important factor is the intended use of the building rather than its outward appearance. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many

people

hold the belief that the purpose of the building is the most important design criterion.

Although

there are some practical explanations behind

this

sentiment, I concede that the exterior of the building

also

plays a vital role in the

success

of the

structure

.  On the one hand, there are several reasons why the intended

use

of

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uilding is important which helps significantly increase the

success

of

structure

. The

first

reason is that

this

is because a building is a process which involves many steps and builders have to spend an amount of money so that they could construct a building.

Thus

,

instead

of worrying about additional features of a

structure

, builders could primarily focus on its intended

use

which enables them to maximize budget efficiency. If the government allocates the budget effectively, they can focus on

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For instance

, the government could prioritize in improving living standards

such

as education, healthcare rather than spending much time on

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tructure.

As a result

,

people

should focus on the intended

use

of building in order to reasonably

use

and not waste money.  

On the other hand

, the exterior of a

structure

is

also

important in

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uccess of

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uilding. If its appearance grabs

people

’s attention, it will generate more revenue because more

people

would enter the building and request service.

For instance

, if a mall is decorated with many wonderful items which could attract consumers, more

people

will go to the mall compared with other malls that are normally decorated.

Furthermore

, the appearance of a building could become a symbolic figure of a city like Bitexco in Vietnam.

Therefore

, it can help countries not only expand traditional customs but

also

promote culture.  To sum up, the functionality of a

structure

is one of the most important design criteria, but I cannot deny that the aesthetic values of

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benefits for the

success

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