When designing a building, the most important factor is the intended use of the building rather than its outward appearance. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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hold the belief that the purpose of the building is the most important design criterion.
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there are some practical explanations behind
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sentiment, I concede that the exterior of the building
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plays a vital role in the
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of the
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.  On the one hand, there are several reasons why the intended
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uilding is important which helps significantly increase the
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of
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. The
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reason is that
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is because a building is a process which involves many steps and builders have to spend an amount of money so that they could construct a building.
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,
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of worrying about additional features of a
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, builders could primarily focus on its intended
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which enables them to maximize budget efficiency. If the government allocates the budget effectively, they can focus on
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, the government could prioritize in improving living standards
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as education, healthcare rather than spending much time on
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tructure.
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,
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should focus on the intended
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of building in order to reasonably
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and not waste money.  
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, the exterior of a
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is
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important in
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uccess of
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uilding. If its appearance grabs
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’s attention, it will generate more revenue because more
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would enter the building and request service.
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, if a mall is decorated with many wonderful items which could attract consumers, more
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will go to the mall compared with other malls that are normally decorated.
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, the appearance of a building could become a symbolic figure of a city like Bitexco in Vietnam.
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, it can help countries not only expand traditional customs but
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promote culture.  To sum up, the functionality of a
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is one of the most important design criteria, but I cannot deny that the aesthetic values of
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uilding
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much
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benefits for the
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uilding.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • functionality
  • user experience
  • ergonomic
  • productivity
  • safety standards
  • building codes
  • emergency exits
  • ventilation
  • accessibility features
  • sustainability
  • energy-efficient
  • flexibility
  • adaptability
  • multifunctional
  • regulations
  • operational costs
  • environmental impact
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