Governments give a lot of support to artists, even though some people think it is a waste of money that could have been used elsewhere. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Although

many people think that the states should invest the money that they give to

artists

in more productive areas.

However

, I

beleive

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believe

that

artists

deserve the financial aid from the governments because they put

alot

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a lot

of effort

in

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their work to make the whole nation proud on

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nternational level. On the one hand, it is expected that

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overnment would invest more

funds

in

education

or

health

facility.

This

is to say that,

health

and

education

is the primary need of human beings and without these facilities

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we cannot able to survive or grow as a whole humankind civilization.

For example

, a bill had been approved in the Pakistan assembly two years ago that

government

would cut the

funds

that they give to the

artists

in the

country

and a half of that money will be spent on

education

and

other

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half on

health

.

However

, I believe

artists

must receive financial assistance from the governments because they do

hardwork

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hard work

in the image creation of the

country

on

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nternational level.

On the other hand

, people who work in

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ntertainment industry give their all to create something special that the whole nation could be proud of on.

Artists

in many

country

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do not get a lot of financial

funds

from the

government

specially

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after their retirement.

For instance

, a legend named Yousuf khan in India worked for the entertainment industry for over forty years has been spending a poor life since his retirement and looking for financial help from the

government

of India.I believe the governments should look after their heroes and give them enough means so could live a happy life in their final years. In conclusion,

although

the states should spend the major proportion of their financial budget on

education

and

health

facilities,

funds

that are given to

artists

cannot be reduced because they are people who bring a lot of praise to the

country

from all around the globe.