Governments give a lot of support to artists, even though some people think it is a waste of money that could have been used elsewhere. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Although
many people think that the states should invest the money that they give to artists
in more productive areas. However
, I believe that artists
deserve financial aid from the governments
because they put a lot of effort into their work to make the whole nation proud on an international level.
On the one hand, it is expected that the governments
would invest more funds
in education
or health
facility. This
is to say that, health
and education
is the primary need of human beings and without these facilities, we cannot able to survive or grow as a whole humankind civilization. For example
, a bill had been approved in the Pakistan assembly two years ago that government would cut the funds
that they give to the artists
in the country and a half of that money will be spent on education
and the other half on health
. However
, I believe artists
must receive financial assistance from the governments
because they do hard work in the image creation of the country on an international level.
On the other hand
, people who work in the entertainment industry give their all to create something special that the whole nation could be proud of on. Artists
in many countries do not get a lot of financial funds
from the government especially after their retirement. For instance
, a legend named Yousuf khan in India worked for the entertainment industry for over forty years has been spending a poor life since his retirement and looking for financial help from the government of India.I believe the governments
should look after their heroes and give them enough means so could live a happy life in their final years.
In conclusion, although
the states should spend a major proportion of their financial budget on education
and health
facilities, funds
that are given to artists
cannot be reduced because they are people who bring a lot of praise to the country from all around the globe.Submitted by saifuddin.abdulrehman on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite