You have a friend who lives abroad. You have decided to apply for a course at one of the colleges in his city. Write to your friend explaining Tell them about the college and the course and why you want to do it. Ask for their help to find accommodation if you get admission to the course.

Dear Warner, I hope you are doing great, congratulations
for
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the new job in Sydney your hard work
finally
pays off. I am happy to share that
i
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have applied for a 6 months
course
in your city which will start
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the
next
month if I got
the
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admission. I have selected the management
course
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Sydney college of management, which is one of the best
college
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in your city. As
i
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already told you in past that
i
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have
great
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interest
towards
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marketing so in order to enhance my knowledge and to get a
well
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payed
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paid
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job
i
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am looking forward
for
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this
course
. As you have already explored the city
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accommodation
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point of view I will be needing your help and experience forgetting the
accomodation
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accommodation
for me before my
course
to get
start
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. kindly help me to find some
suitaple
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suitable
place to live during my
course
period, thanks in advance. Best wishes, Nitin
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