You have a friend who lives abroad. You have decided to apply for a course at one of the colleges in his city. Write to your friend explaining Tell them about the college and the course and why you want to do it. Ask for their help to find accommodation if you get admission to the course.

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Dear Warner, I hope you are doing great, congratulations

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the new job in Sydney your hard work

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pays off. I am happy to share that

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have applied for a 6 months

course

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in your city which will start

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month if I got

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admission. I have selected the management

course

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Sydney college of management, which is one of the best

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in your city. As

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already told you in past that

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have

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marketing so in order to enhance my knowledge and to get a

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job

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am looking forward

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course

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. As you have already explored the city

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accommodation

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point of view I will be needing your help and experience forgetting the

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accommodation

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to get

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. kindly help me to find some

suitaple

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suitable

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period, thanks in advance. Best wishes, Nitin

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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157 words

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Some people believe that developments in the field of artificial intelligence will have a positive impact on our lives in the near future. To what extent do you agree or disagree?