Some people say it is important to plant trees in the open spaces in towns and cities than to build more housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is currently a contentious argument over the necessity of tree plantation in the open rooms in towns and cities. In my perspective, I total agree with
this
idea.
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essay is going to analyze some potential preferences to support my agreement. On the one hand, it is quite obvious that people nowadays need a huge number of housing.
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, we are living in
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odern era,
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, building construction is quite likely to play a role in our society. For
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example, the population explosion in decades has been increasing the worldwide household demand. Human,
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much more spaces to build not only housing but
also
workplaces.
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a method to solve
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state. It is aimed to create huge negative impacts
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the Earth mother and disbalance natural diversity.
On the other hand
, it is undoubted that
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ree has an essential part
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human life. What I mean by
this
is that planting trees is significantly important to elevate the quality of life. Taking Japan as an instance. Japanese government implement a
compaign
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to construct eco-friendly park with a number of green trees in metropolises,
such
as Tokyo, Kyoto.
This
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helps reduce the hazardous gas pumped to
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nvironment and create places for citizens to relieve stresses and enjoy
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resh air after high-pressure working schedule.
Nevertheless
, tree plantation is more likely to impair the disadvantage of climate change by regulating CO2 ratio
that is
from vehicles and hard industries. In conclusion, the importance of planting trees is absolutely clear
although
housing demand is increasing. I quite believe that the whole world could handle
this
matter wisely by some environmentally eco-friendly methods.
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