Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers ,whereas others argue the homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your opinion.
It appears that an article is missing before the word student. Consider adding the article.
The noun phrase secondary class child seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
It appears that you have an unnecessary comma after the subordinating conjunction Because. Consider removing the comma.
Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.
If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.
Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.
Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:
...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?
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