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e-Books are completely taking over paper-based books. University libraries should focus on e-books only instead of paper-based books. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your opinion.

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Technology and innovation of smart
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 have encouraged more people to use online
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instead
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 of the traditional. In my opinion, I support
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 especially, in college libraries because they are easy to handle, cheap and have
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ong life span,
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, these
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 may cause eye fatigue to readers, and violate writers copyrights. The ease to handle is the main positive of online
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. These
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 allow readers to read on their smart
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 without the need to carry something
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. Another advantage is its price, which is considered cheaper than real paper
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, and as a matter of fact, if the universities' library planned to buy
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, it would probably save much more money. In closing, these
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 never damage like paper.
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, if a reader slip water on
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aper book,
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 users will not care about these issues. Despite positives of
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, negatives
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, few people might complain about their eyes' fatigue due to the use of
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 because these people have sensitivity from smart
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 mobile phones.
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,
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 rarely violate the copyrights of the writers as
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 of each reader has to pay to buy a book,
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 happens only once, and
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 likely lead
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 to stop writing as it is the only way for their living. To conclude, even though
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 can easily
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sed whatever the place is, nearly cost nothing, and they never been damaged, these
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 may cause eye disorders because of the light of smart
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