A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary or unpaid work. you would like to do some voluntary or unpaid work at the Museum . write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary unpaid work. in your letter explain why you want to do voluntary work and the museum describe some skills and equality you have that would be useful . give details of when you would be available for work .
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter with regards to applying for the part-time voluntary and paid work which you announced about it.
I would like to work as a volunteer at the museum
for many reasons. Firstly
, I am a student and the professor of history at my university asked us to do research about our country's history that should include photos and real information about some of the things which exist at the Museum
. Hence
, I can do good research. Secondly
, this
amazing opportunity can boost my professional skills and communications. Finally
, the museum
is located in our home vicinity. Therefore
, I will not waste time by using crowded transportation as well as
I can appreciate the diverse events at the Museum
whenever.
Moreover
, I am interested in this
position because I have many skills that may be beneficial to your activities and museum
in general. Correct article usage
the museum
Such
as, I speak three different languages(Arabic, Turkish, and English) fluently.In addition
, I have a good experience in technical devices and networks. Furthermore
, I am a fast learner and I can work effectively in a team.
Finally
, I can join your team at the beginning of next month. I mean on the first April
2024.
I hope to find acceptance from your kind person.
Yours faithfully,
AmalChange preposition
of April
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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph has a clear focus and sticks to a single idea to enhance readability.
coherence cohesion
While you've structured your letter logically, refining the transition between ideas could smooth the progression further.
task achievement
It's great to see your enthusiasm in the letter, but make sure every paragraph clearly advances your main goal of applying for the voluntary position.
task achievement
Adding a brief summary in your closing about why you're excited for this opportunity could reinforce your interest.
task achievement
Your introduction is clear and states your intention right away.
coherence cohesion
You've effectively used paragraphs to organize your letter, which helps in readability and structure.
greeting and closing
The use of a formal greeting and closing adds to the appropriateness of your letter for the context.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite