A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some
people
believe that
animals
should be treated in the same way
humans
are and have similar rights, whereas others think that it is more important to use them (
animals
) as we desire for
food
and medical
research
.
This
essay will discuss both points of view. With regard to the exploitation of
animals
,
people
believe it is acceptable for several reasons.
Firstly
, they (
people
) think that
humans
are the most important beings on the planet, and everything must be done to ensure human survival. If
this
(ensuring human survival) means experimenting on
animals
so that we (
humans
)can fight and find cures for diseases,
then
this
(experimenting on
animals
) takes priority over animal suffering.
Furthermore
, it is believed by some that
animals
do not feel pain or loss as
humans
do, so if we (
humans
) have to kill
animals
for
food
or other uses,
then
this
(killing
animals
for
food
or other uses) is morally acceptable.
However
, I do not believe these arguments (the previous arguments - though
this
is made clear by the noun repeated after it in
this
case) stand up to scrutiny.
To begin
, it has been shown on numerous occasions by secret filming in laboratories via animal rights groups that
animals
feel as much pain as
humans
do,
andthey
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and they
(
animals
) suffer when they (
animals
) are kept in cages for long periods.
In addition
, a substantial amount of animal
research
is done for cosmetics, not to find cures for diseases, so
this
(animal
research
for cosmetics) is unnecessary.
Finally
, it has
also
been proven that
humans
can get all the nutrients and vitamins that they(
humans
) need from green vegetables and fruit.
Therefore
, again, having to kill
animals
for
food
is not an adequate argument. To sum up,
although
some
people
argue killing
animals
for
research
and
food
is ethical, I would argue there is sufficient evidence to demonstrate that
this
(the arguments that killing
animals
for
research
and
food
is ethical) is not the case, and,
therefore
, steps must be taken to improve the rights of
animals
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Exploitation
  • Animal welfare
  • Ethical treatment
  • Vegetarianism
  • Veganism
  • Cognitive dissonance
  • Humane
  • Live stock
  • Cruelty-free
  • Bioethics
  • Conservation
  • Habitat preservation
  • Ecosystem
  • Biodiversity
  • Animal testing
  • Synthetic biology
  • Genetic engineering
  • Speciesism
  • Animal husbandry
  • Sustainable farming
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