In recent years a large number of highly skilled professionals like doctors, engineers and IT professionals from poorer countries are migrating to developed countries for better-paying jobs. What are the possible problems of this and what solutions can you suggest to deal with this issue?

Nowadays, there is
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oard of migration of highly skilled
professionals
like doctors, engineers and IT
professionals
from
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third
world to developed nations for personal
development
and high salary jobs.
This
essay will discuss problems related to
this
and possible solution to tackle them.
To begin
with the
first
problem, it is
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eal irony that when the poor
countries
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in need of their skilled youth for the betterment and
development
of the nation the
professionals
leave their own homeland in search of better opportunity which may be in the form of
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etter salary, high standard of living and personal improvements.
This
leads to
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ack of skilled
professionals
in the poor or developing
country
moreover
it affects the economy of the nation.
For instance
, if there is lack of skilled doctors
then
the needy one has to go to
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another country
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country
for better treatment
hence
leads to detrimental effects on
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ountry's reputation.
Secondly
,
this
migration leads to overpopulation in developed
countries
and
this
will somehow
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society.
For instance
, many nations put
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old on visas of foreigners workers. Embarking with the solution,
firstly
government of poor
countries
should bring viable opportunity for their skilled
professionals
so that they are not forced to leave their motherland. If we cite an example many developing nation introduce jobs fair in their
countries
.
Secondly
, developed
countries
should promote their big organization to open their services and offices in poor nations. In conclusion,
migratiion
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migration
of skilled youth leads to personal
development
but brings down
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ountry economy and slow its
development
.
Government
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should deal with
this
issue
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bringing new job opportunities.
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