Crime & Punishment Some people believe that there should be a fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both of these two views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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A few individual's think that there must be a particular
punishment
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for every kind of
crime
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.While, some disagree to
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, and argue that
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should
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be taken into account on the situation of the
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as well as the motive to commit it. I will discuss my both views and give my opinion
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below. On account of fixed punishments on each type of
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.I would like to list a few reasons. Hang till dead
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for murderers and rapists must be introduced,
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will result in low
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rate.
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:-Information gathered from various sourses by BBC India, Uttar Pradesh (U.P) has the highest number of rape
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, lynching murder
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recorded.
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, disobeying traffic rules, having the same amount of fine for breaking signal and over speeding. People will think twice before committing the
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.
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, some individual's argue that punishments should be decided on the motive and situation of the
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.
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, murder and accident are two different
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and must be judged
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, having same
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for both is injustice. Recently, An incident occurred in U.P a person accidentally hit a woman and now
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a person is sentenced to death.
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, the lynching, killing innocent life
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are still under review. In conclusion to people who that there must be a fixed
punishment
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for every kind of
crime
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. While some argued that
punishment
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should depend on the
crime
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and motive of it. I certainly believe, punishments should be decided on the circumstances of the
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.While, having fixed
punishment
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is completely injustice to the minor criminal acts.
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