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Some people believe that having too many TV channels is good for people, while some other pole believe that it only brings some poor quality TV programs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Entertainment is must escape from monotony. Television plays an enormous role in entertaining, some
people
 opine that with the increasing number of
channels
 the quality is decreasing whilst others have contrast viewpoint.
Although
 variety is vital, I believe content displayed on these should be meaningful. On
the
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one side, different
people
 prefer different kinds of
channels
.
Firstly
, there is diversity in society,
people
 are from dissimilar cultures and understand unrelated languages. These
people
 require a variety of shows according to their thoughts and beliefs.
For instance
, Asian
people
 prefer to watch daily soaps and family dramas.
Secondly
, every age group has its own choice, children like to watch cartoons;
nevertheless
, old
people
 watch the news.
This
 is necessary to satisfy the needs and provide shows
accordingly
.
Hence
, quantity becomes paramount to gratify viewers. On the other side, unwanted and unuseful contents are displayed if the
media
 is not controlled. In the race of adding new
channels
,
media
 companies forget to provide meaningful information.
For instance
, some are displaying debauchery which is detrimentally affecting society. Same content based shows are exhibited which is monotonous for spectators. Programs are often repeated and remade. In place of
this
, new ideas should be encouraged and motivated which is possible with fewer options.
Therefore
, sharing thoughtful information is vital irrespective of number. In conclusion, visual
media
 is crucial in the entertainment industry.
Media
 companies are losing their purpose to entertain
people
;
however
, goals are just to make profits from advertisements which gradually result in an increase in the number of
channels
. I believe proper control should be maintained on the information.
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