Nowadays, parents are sending their children on trips abroad for educational purposes. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
These days studying in
well developed
countries are increasingly popular and parents are Add a hyphen
well-developed
more keen
on encouraging their kids to get educational course overseas. Replace the words
keener
Although
,
it is very common that Remove the comma
apply
students
will encounter comunnication
and cultural Correct your spelling
communication
diferences
, they will Correct your spelling
differences
also
gain new skills throughout their study where they can possibly use it in the future. This
essay will discuss the benefit and drawback of students
pursuing their study abroad.
To start with, when a person travelled to d
ifferent country it is often Add an article
a
undestood
that they will experience communication difficulties and cultural differences. These two Correct your spelling
understood
hindrance
are quite common if Change the determiner
hindrances
english
is the Change the capitalization
English
first
spoken language of the student so as the culture. For example
, when I decided to enrolled
myself on a 3months course Change the verb
enroll
her
in New Zealand. I would admit that I had Correct your spelling
here
p
roblem communicating with Add an article
a
poeple
as I met different their accents Correct your spelling
people
varies
too and adjusting to it was my major problem those days. Change the verb form
vary
In addition
, culture difference gives a huge impact too, I noticed education her are taught really fast compared to the Philippines. Therefore
, facing some differences when studying abroad is un avoidable
.
Correct your spelling
unavoidable
Lastly
, I do believe that studying abroad will give individuals a chance to hone their skills. One reason behind this
is finishing a degree will gives
them better chances for employment if they can prove that the completed their course abroad. Change the verb form
give
For example
, huge firms right now will prefer to employ someone who has garduated
abroad. Not only that their skills are excellent but Correct your spelling
graduated
also
their education are higher because they achieved overseas. As a result
, studying in universities abroad will give better opputurenity in the future.
In conclusion, parents who sent their children in prestigeous
Correct your spelling
prestigious
unversities
abroad are Correct your spelling
universities
progresively
increasing nowadays. Even Correct your spelling
progressively
students
will experience difficulties in communication and culture, it is in fact these barriers are the reason why they are pursuing their dreams in the
rich country. In my opinion, Change the article
a
students
are better off studying abroad as this
will benefit their education experience in the future.Submitted by mhelrose.alfaro193 on
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...