To succeed in a business, one needs to know maths. What extent agree/disagree

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We have always read or heard different logics requirements to run a

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from many established

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. Though many

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point it out how knowing mathematics is necessary to succeed. But is knowing

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for

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job type really necessary? And in

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essay, we will argue how succeeding in

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is not dependent on

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. On one hand, we have many established businesses who claim knowing numbers is the only way to run the organization and climb the ladder

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because there are certain things which they should always be aware

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whether its stock

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or profit and losses. And all these areas should be strong for an individual who wants to do something in

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specific field.

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, Reliance invested on “Ajio” shopping app, it was not known previously nor had many customers who were interested as many other giants were already in the picture

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as Myntra and Flipkart. But Reliance trends was already famous walk-in clothing lines,

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easier access on an app would increase the users and the profit for the company as well. And

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calculated risk, succeeded and “Ajio” is

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econd largest

ecommerce

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e-commerce

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online for purchasing clothes.

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financial risk is only possible when you understand the percentage required to invest to

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purchase, which can help in the growth as well as understand the recovery rate in case they suffer a loss in case it goes the other way.

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, though a

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would definitely have an upper-hand if they have

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proper

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about the

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as well as the numbers they need to grow in it,

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the

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that knowing

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is a “need” is preposterous. To start a

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, one needs intellect and an “

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”, because these together can start to make the way for you. And major requirement here is an investor for that

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, rest to calculate a risk or predicated profit or loss can be done by hired finance folks,

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not a dead-end requirement that the person needs to know mathematics to achieve that success.

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, if the

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starts selling, a

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will grow automatically,

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investments and growth

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dependent on learning the

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, which the individual will start learning the moment, he/she sets his or her foot on the

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field.

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, Reliance creator Late Dhirubhai Ambani started his

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by selling fabrics, he never finished his schooling but slowly understood how the

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works, and most importantly how persuasion plays a key role in it and later started growing his

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in different sectors. Did he need numbers? Yes! But did he had to do the math to succeed? No, he had

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who did it for him, but to reach that point, his knowledge about the

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, and

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played the key part.

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, the statement that Math being a need could potentially de-motivate many

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entrepreneurs who

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big dreams and intelligent ideas to succeed in life. In conclusion,

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who suggest

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a thing has a flawed understanding and can in many ways discourage our young generation to think out of the box.

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essay has argued how succeeding in

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one doesn’t necessarily

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to know

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

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