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The internet is viewed as an excellent means of communication by many. However, there are others who would argue that it is actually destroying our communication skills. Discuss both views and give your opinion

#internet #communication #skills
The Internet has become an indispensable part of the modern world. Some
people
 opine that
this
 is a reason behind bad communication skills whilst others have contrast viewpoint.
Although
 it helps in improving writing skills, I believe
face
 to
face
 interactions are deteriorating. On the one side, on social media common
people
 type and write messages.
This
 way their language abilities are alleviating.
For example
, on Twitter different
people
 share their thoughts and opinions. To type a post,
people
 should be instilled with
k
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the
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nowledge of good words. In the purpose of impressing others, users of social media learn vocabulary. Those who write in an impressive manner are more likely to earn followers.
Hence
, to be favourite of others, users improve their skills. On the other side,
face
 to
face
 meetings
are
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is
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 decreasing due to
i
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the
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nternet. Friends and
realtives
Correct your spelling
relatives
 connect on social media in place of visiting their homes. If they do not meet personally, they would not talk and speak.
For instance
, most of the young
people
 do not like to verbally communicate, they
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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