Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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harbour a belief that reducing of the particular species of plants and animals is a

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main environmental issue nowadays, while others hold the reverse viewpoint. From my perspective, it is a controversial issue which deserves an in-depth discussion.

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with, one of the main argument in its favour is that some particular creatures are the vital role for balancing the biosphere. Each animal has

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role to play in nature

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pretators

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, preys and generators. If these special animals are extinct, it would bring

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negative outcomes.

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the aforementioned, there is a growing tendency that many farmers nowadays tend to plant some profitable grains or cultivate particular flowers in order to cater

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customers'

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of fostering diversity of plants. It might cause

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crisis of food to human once the agricultural products suffer from diseases.

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, there are some other environmental problems which

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to concern.

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urban area is one of the main issues,

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occasionally realize the fact that

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evelopment of cities of infrastructure deprives many animals' inhabitants .

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, the urbanization leads to

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serious atmospheric pollution. Considering the traffic congestion, citizens not only live in the devasted environment but

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contract the respiratory disease

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as asthma and bronchitis. Based on these compelling evidence, it appears that those problems are worthy for

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to put more

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. In conclusion, the issue of special creatures declining is serious;

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, I personally believe that other environmental problems should not be ignored and

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need to be resolved.

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Topic Vocabulary:

biodiversity
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habitat loss
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