Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some customers'
people
harbour a belief that reducing of the particular species of plants and animals is a formost
main environmental issue nowadays, while others hold the reverse viewpoint. From my perspective, it is a controversial issue which deserves an in-depth discussion.
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foremost
To begin
with, one of the main argument in its favour is that some particular creatures are the vital role for balancing the biosphere. Each animal has their
role to play in nature Change the pronoun
its
such
as pretators
, preys and generators. If these special animals are extinct, it would bring Correct your spelling
predators
the
negative outcomes. Remove the article
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Besides
the aforementioned, there is a growing tendency that many farmers nowadays tend to plant some profitable grains or cultivate particular flowers in order to caterVerify preposition usage
to
favors
, Change the spelling
favours
instead
of fostering diversity of plants. It might cause the
crisis of food to human once the agricultural products suffer from diseases.
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On the other hand
, there are some other environmental problems which deserves
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people
to concern. Over-sprawling
urban area is one of the main issues, Add an article
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An over-sprawling
people
occasionally realize the fact that d
evelopment of cities of infrastructure deprives many animals' inhabitants . Add an article
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Moreover
, the urbanization leads to the
serious atmospheric pollution. Considering the traffic congestion, citizens not only live in the devasted environment but Remove the article
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also
contract the respiratory disease such
as asthma and bronchitis. Based on these compelling evidence, it appears that those problems are worthy for people
to put more attentions
.
In conclusion, the issue of special creatures declining is serious; Correct your spelling
attention
however
, I personally believe that other environmental problems should not be ignored and also
need to be resolved.Submitted by Charlotte on
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