Do people learn more from losing than from winning? Do you agree or disagree whit this statement

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There has been lately an attempt to teach our society that, we must always win in everything.
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, it is impossible stay on the top ranking always. Loses always bring up some lessons. Personally, I completely agree with
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claim for three reasons: miss for learn, believe in their
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and find the errors.
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of all, it is extremely important that the person can learn with the waste.
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, when I was a child I was a good swimmer, so because if
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I thought that my workouts were enough.
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, one day, after has winning some conquests, I failed my
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final. I felt too bad, because in my mind, I just to know
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. When I recognized the lose, I started cry. My father since said, son it is impossible keep the on the top, you should not feel safe with your workouts, you should keep you efforts and be humble.
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, the lose is important to the people knowledge their
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or how efforts theirs put in something.
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, when the team can range a final championship, sometimes only that matters is the
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.
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, the team should not forget the
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, because whether the
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is reached or not, the
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always will be valued.
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, when the lose appear, we have be able to find the errors and improve.
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, if the during the year a soccer team put a lot of efforts in strategy, but in the final,
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strategy doesn´t work, it is time to review the plan and think in another manner to range the goal. It is work for our social life, student life, work, office, projects, schedule etc. In conclusion, the loses always welcome, in my opinion. Because we always can enjoy something positive. How was said before, keep on the top always, sometimes became us in too safe, “over safe”. The
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is good, but the losing sometimes is better than a
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, we always learn something when we lose something.
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