It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sports or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both viewpoints and give your opinion.
It is argued that some individuals are born with talents, while others claim that everyone can be an expert if learned in an effective manner in various facilities like
sports
and music. As both viewpoints have merits, I tend to believe that all possess the same kinds of brains but what makes difference is the desire and hard work to expertise in a specific field
.
First
of all, it is generally believed that some people gain particular capabilities during their birth. In other words
, they are born genius in specific things such
as music or sports
. One
clear example is Sachin Tendulkar, one
of the famous sports
player who was expert in playing games since his childhood. In my experience, there is some kind of magical powers in him,especially for sports
. Therefore
, it is argued that some people are inborn talented.
On the other hand
, people who oppose this
view feel that a child can learn any types of work, which means that if an individual is taught to play the musical instrument and sing a song, he/she can eventually be an expert in that field
. One
clear example is Swoopna Suman, a celebrity of the music industry in Nepal who had really worked hard to reach this
position. For this
reason, we can say that anyone can gain knowledge in any field
if learned wisely and honestly with full of desire.
Taking everything into consideration, it is clear that both the arguments are based on people’s thoughts which is agreeable for one
and not for others. Therefore
, I strongly believe that anybody can be a genius in their own field
with a willingness to achieve.Submitted by Aashish Karki on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite