Dear Mr. Rogers, I would like to express my interest in a Refrigeration and Air Conditioning Mechanic

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Rogers, I would like to express my interest in a Refrigeration and Air Conditioning Mechanic vacancy. I found the job offer extremely interesting to me.

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, I have experience in

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industry for around 20 years.

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, I have a Seaman’s Identification Card and I have built a sailboat with my own hands.

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, the job fits my expectations of being a perfect one. As for my experience, I can install, maintain and repair Refrigeration and Air Conditioning equipment varying from residential to industrial ones. Now I have been working in Canada, but originally I am from Ukraine. I have experience working in different companies as a Refrigeration Technician and an HVAC Engineer. I am a hard-working and easily trained employee. Unfortunately, I do not have White Card, Australian Driver’s License, and RHL, but I have Ukrainian and Canadian Driver’s Licenses. I hope that I can get all of them in Australia. I would be happy to become a part of your team. I am enclosing my CV to

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email. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Oleksandr Pereverziev

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.5

Complete response

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

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9 paragraphs

184 words

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Dear Mr. Rogers, I would like to express my interest in a Refrigeration and Air Conditioning Mechanic

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These dats people are using the internet for shopping, work and to communicate with others without the need for face to face meetings. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Modern people mostly stay at home rather than going outdoors. What are the reasons for this trend? Is this trend good or bad?

It must be a woman who stays at home to care for children. Men are not suited to this kind of work. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

some believe studying alone is better and while some others believe group study is far good. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

some feel that governments should prioritize healthcare instead of other important areas. to what extend do you agree or disagree?