IELTS Writing Correction Service /
Writing Samples /
Band 7.5

write a letter: Expressing Gratitude for Excellent Service Received at a Hotel Express gratitude for the excellent service received during the stay at the hotel. Highlight the aspects of the service that were particularly exceptional or noteworthy. Mention specific staff members or instances where the service exceeded expectations.

#gratitude #service #hotel #stay #aspects #staff #members #instances #expectations
Dear Mr. Johnson, I hope
this
 letter finds you well. I am writing to express my gratitude for the excellent service I received during my recent stay at your
hotel
. I had the pleasure of staying at the Golden Sands
Hotel
 from January 10th to January 15th, and I must say, my experience was exceptional. From the moment I arrived, the staff was courteous, attentive, and always willing to assist with any requests I had. The room was immaculately clean and comfortable, providing a peaceful retreat after a long day of exploring the city. I would like to extend a special thank you to your concierge, Mr. Smith, who went above and beyond to ensure that my stay was memorable. His knowledge of the local area and recommendations for dining and sightseeing were invaluable, and greatly enhanced my visit to the city.
Additionally
, I would like to commend your restaurant staff for the delicious meals served throughout my stay. The variety and quality of the food exceeded my expectations, and I thoroughly enjoyed every meal I had at the
hotel
.
Overall
, my experience at the Golden Sands
Hotel
 was nothing short of excellent, and I would not hesitate to recommend it to friends and colleagues
traveling
Change the spelling
travelling
show examples
 to the area. Thank you once again for providing
such
 outstanding service, and please extend my thanks to your staff for their hard work and dedication. I look forward to staying at your
hotel
 again in the future. Warm regards, Dhruvil Patel
Submitted by rushsoni1998 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

coherence cohesion
Provide more varied sentence structures to enhance readability and engagement.
task achievement
Consider using a wider range of vocabulary to more vividly describe experiences and emotions, adding depth to the letter.
coherence cohesion
To further improve coherence, you could add a brief conclusion summarizing your feelings or stating an intention to return, reinforcing your gratitude.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: