Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down. Others however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.

Animals

, just like us, have the need to be taken good care of. They

also

have basic necessities,

such

as food and habitat. In my own opinion,

animals

must freely live where they belong, and

that is

basically, not in the zoo.

This

essay wishes to make fair points as to why

zoos

should be turned down.

Firstly

,

zoos

are rude, they deprive the

animals

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freedom to run wildly into the woods;

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would result

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a food chain interruption, which is of vital importance in balancing our ecosystem.

For instance

,

this

will lead to hunger and

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isappearance of other

animals

in the food web.

Secondly

, having the

animals

locked in the

zoos

, sometimes causes abuses, which are way too unethical. To illustrate, some

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could be inflicting pain to elephants to perform a show, just to make tons of money. These reasons clearly portray why these precious creatures must not be locked in a zoo.

However

, some people point out that

zoos

are better animal habitat as they protect

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wild

animals

.

For example

, a Philippine eagle is kept in a cage for years, at

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will avoid the hunters from gunning down an almost extinct

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.

In other words

,

zoos

will become the

animals

' safe haven from deplorable humans. Another point to stress is that

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some

animals

are way too dangerous if left alone in the wilds. These

animals

,

however

, can be tamed once trained around human beings,

for instance

, particular species of lions. These are the only reasons

zoos

are helpful for

animals

. Many issues have been revolving around whether

zoos

must be shut down or must be kept open. I, as a stewardess of nature, believe that

animals

must be left alone in their own habitats, where they can live naturally.

Nevertheless

, all kinds of species must receive all the care they deserve, despite their fauna.