In the most part of the world, the volume of traffic growing at an alarming rate. In the form of assignment, discuss about the main traffic problems, their causes and possible problem.

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traffic
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eally significant problem.
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uman should solve
this
problem quickly because it will
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be troubles
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in long term. There are several negative effects due to surpass from car growing. The primary cause of
traffic
increasing is
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inordinate of
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ehicle since cars are assessed by
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howroom
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low price.
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,
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most people can spend their money to be their own vehicles for using them daily.
For instance
, Thai citizens like to drive cars by themselves for working, studying, working and so on.
Furthermore
, The awful transportation is cause from inflating
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umber of
traffic
growing.
Although
the
governments
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launch campaign
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change people’s behaviours to use public transport, it
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not improve the situation.
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, they should use their expenditure
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developing transportation.
This
circumstance
contribute
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to the
traffic
jam on alarming of
traffic
growing as there
are
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more automobile than the past.
Therefore
, unless they are hardly decreased, The trouble will be growing up more and more.
In addition
, The situation
lead
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to pollution on air and noise because many cars do not be frequently maintained. As a consequence, there are pollution is essentially in
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most city.
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one of
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ollution which
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is caused by old vehicles. In conclusion,
traffic
growing in
overlimit
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over limit
is
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ajor trouble in
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many
country
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of
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the world. So people as a human being must
to
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help
this
problem from little thing that they can do it to saving
this
planet for the
next
generation.
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