In the most part of the world, the volume of traffic growing at an alarming rate. In the form of assignment, discuss about the main traffic problems, their causes and possible problem.

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eally significant problem.
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uman should solve
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in long term. There are several negative effects due to surpass from car growing. The primary cause of
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inordinate of
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ehicle since cars are assessed by
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low price.
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most people can spend their money to be their own vehicles for using them daily.
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, Thai citizens like to drive cars by themselves for working, studying, working and so on.
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, The awful transportation is cause from inflating
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umber of
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growing.
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the
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launch campaign
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change people’s behaviours to use public transport, it
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not improve the situation.
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, they should use their expenditure
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developing transportation.
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circumstance
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to the
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growing as there
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more automobile than the past.
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, unless they are hardly decreased, The trouble will be growing up more and more.
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to pollution on air and noise because many cars do not be frequently maintained. As a consequence, there are pollution is essentially in
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most city.
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ollution which
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is caused by old vehicles. In conclusion,
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growing in
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ajor trouble in
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many
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the world. So people as a human being must
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help
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problem from little thing that they can do it to saving
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planet for the
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generation.
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