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5. You are leaving your job and would like to invite your friend to replace you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: -describe the job -explain the reason you are leaving -tell him/her why you would recommend the job to them

#job #friend #-describe #-explain #reason #-tell
Dear Jane, I hope
this
 letter finds you well. I’m just writing to let you know that I’m leaving my accounts manager and I want you to join in my position. My job typically involves bookkeeping and preparing financial reports for top management. Well, sometimes, especially on the month ends work overload increases, but overall it is a well-paying and interesting job. I am promoted to Finance controller and moving to another location within the same company. As the company is going very fast, I have to look after the western region of the corporation. As we studied accountancy together in the college and working in the same field, I know your work preferences and other financial remuneration related expectations. Anyways, I have forwarded your resume to my boss. Be well prepared for the interview! Looking forward to seeing
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 the interview. Best wishes. James.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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