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Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skills and imagination than reading. To what extent do you agree? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.

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-children can be potentially more motivated and more involved in what he is interested in. Example MUSE -literacy , write grammatically better In recent years, the question is what is the best approach to teach a child is
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 to the beneficial aspects of reading is that it significantly develop children's literacy. To put it differently, while spending time with
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, as well as how to build XX sentences and collocations. As a case in point, by involving a child in reading, a parent can potentially
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