Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people believe that melody is something for everyone regardless of maturity, or cultural background.
However
, In my opinion, I do not agree with
this
opinion as everyone has a different feeling on
songs
and the types of tune. At the
first
place, individuals from different age groups who are having a different taste of melody are hardly bond together via
music
.
For example
, among the generation of my parents, some classical
songs
are usually much popular. Whereas in my generation, some electrical
music
or hip-hop
are
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much popular, which is not the tone for the elderly.
Therefore
, holding different taste for tone, crowds from
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different era cannot be identical in terms of the relationship. At the
second
place, to be honest, even for the same generation group, different culture background may
also
lead them to conflicts when it comes to the tune taste. The hip-hop, and pop
songs
,
for instance
, are two kinds of popular
music
style amount American and Chinese teenagers respectively.
Furthermore
, another obvious example is that the boys in china prefer rock and roll but the girls like K-pop much more.
Thus
, the example above shows that because of the different understanding of
music
theory,
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ommunity even from the same age cannot gather together for
music
. In conclusion, all the above demonstrates that either hip-pops or light
songs
cannot be a good way to enhance communication between different groups of
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rowd.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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