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The number of advertisements for charities on television and the Internet seems to be increasing. What is causing this? Is this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer & include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

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In the present world, the usage of the Internet is universal, which is convenient and easy for transporting
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information. Under
this
 circumstance, the little-known facts are widely spread,
such
 as charities. From my perspective, I believe
this
 is due to improvement in human’ s moral disciplines and it is a positive advancement. On the one hand, the main reason for
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umber of advertisements
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 charities
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 television and the Internet is that there is an increase in
people
’s sense of duty. As more
people
 are aware of not everyone
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 the same life,
people
 who concern social responsibilities tend to help the
people
 with lower income, but one’s power is limited, so the emergence of that kind of advertisement is avoidable for the purpose of increasing more
people
’s consciousness and gathering their power to give hand to the vulnerable groups.
On the other hand
, I personally reckon
this
 situation is a positive development because it can illustrate ideology is improving. In the ancient,
people
 were more likely to be selfish that could be
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utocratic monarchy.
However
, the society that we live in right now is more democratic and harmonious, which means the vulnerable group will not be ignored and exploited.
People
 nowadays consider social obligation more than before, which is beneficial for the development of the human culture that will become more flourishing because everybody enjoys better living standards. In conclusion, I believe the rise in
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mount of public service announcements is mainly due to increasing mentality of social responsibility, and it is a rewarding improvement which benefits the whole development of all
people
 around the world.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • nonprofit organization
  • crowdfunding
  • philanthropy
  • altruism
  • donor fatigue
  • corporate social responsibility
  • social media influence
  • charitable giving
  • sponsorship
  • transparency
  • accountability
  • awareness campaign
  • digital marketing
  • emotional appeal
  • fundraising
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