When international media (including movies, fashion shows, advertisements and other TV programmes) convey the same messages to the global audience, people argue that the expansion of international media has negative impacts on cultural diversity. What is your opinion?

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As international
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companies expand across the world, the growing popularity and uniformity of some
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programs
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, fashion shows)
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causing worldwide concern. Many
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have strong views
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trend. In my opinion, international
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is closely linked to cultural globalization and cultural homogeneity. The dominance of international
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is a sign of Western cultural imperialism and has the potential to thwart cultural
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. It is not a secret that international
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is owned and operated by a handful of giant corporations,
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as Time Warner. They control large sectors of the
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market and place national
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companies at risk. The contraction in the number of
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owners will cause a proportional reduction, in the variety of
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broadcasted.
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, painting, music and
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accessible in the
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have a small number of genres, imposing restraints on one's knowledge of artworks of different cultural backgrounds.
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to seizing control over those creative industries, global entertainment companies affect cultural
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by reshaping the perceptions, beliefs and norms of ordinary citizens in different countries. Most of the cultural values and ideals promoted by the leading mainstream
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are of
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origin.
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culture values individuality, maximization of one's benefits and material wealth, rather than communal
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and family solidarity, the values and norms previously treasured in" many Asian countries. Unfortunately, many Asian
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now imitate
American
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people
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, causing the alteration of their perceptions of family.
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radical change can be attributed to those
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and TV
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that portray the success of
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individuals or corporations. The loss of
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diversity
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is
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responsible for
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's narrow sense of ways of
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. The ruling class of many countries speaks English,
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Western food, wears Western-style jackets and even prefers Western weddings. Young
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are captivated by
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basketball and some even daubing the names of NBA stars on their school sweatsuits. All these transformations in
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are the result of the audience's exposure to Hollywood
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, TV shows and sports reports. The loss of
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diversity
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will lead to
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egradation of culture and to a minimization of cultural
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. It is a worrying trend, as
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need cultural
diversity
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to preserve and pass on their valuable heritage to future generations, including lifestyle. As shown above, international
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, controlled by a handful of transnational
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corporations, is exporting Western culture worldwide and putting many indigenous cultures at the risk of extinction. The uniformity of
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programs
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has led to that of artworks, norms and ways of
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wherever international
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goes.
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