Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are various environmental issues that exist in the world today and these are one of the most discussed topics. Some people say that the most crucial environmental problems of our time
is
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the loss of particular species of animals and
plants
, meanwhile, others believe that there are other environmental problems that need to be focused. In my opinion , the extinction of
plants
and animals is
the
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major environmental issue. The following essay will inform us about both the views and
also
will give an explanation on my opinion. On the one hand,the extinction of particular species of
plants
and animals is the most vital issue because
this
will disturb the food chain.
For example
, if carnivores
such
as tigers will get extinct ,
then
more number of herbivores
such
as dears will be there and
this
would disturb the food chain as the herbivores will eat more number of
plants
and
then
there will be no balance maintained. To illustrate , if there are less number of
plants
,
then
the level of carbon dioxide emissions will increase.
On the other hand
, other environmental problems are
also
very important.
For example
, depletion of the ozone layer will lead to global warming and
this
will affect the climate.
For instance
, nowadays icebergs are melting which will lead to a rise in sea level. Climate change
such
as the unusual rainfall like acid rain affects numerous amount of
plants
and
this
is leading to disturbance in the environment. To conclude, in my opinion
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it is very important to focus on the extinction of species because
this
will
also
affect the climate and will lead to a major environmental issue .
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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