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These days Internet-based courses have become a popular alternative to university-based courses. Some students prefer this type of learning because they do not need to attend lectures. Others argue that it is important to study at university. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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In recent years, the introduction of online studies has raised several questions on the imperativeness of classroom education. In my opinion,
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 the internet has become a supporting element in the education system, it can never replace the lessons one can receive from the universities. In
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 essay, we will discuss both sides of the argument to understand it better. To start with, the World Wide Web-based learning platforms can facilitate the students to learn independently without any restriction of space or time.
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, with the availability of the internet, one can pursue their education from an international institute by sitting in their home country.
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 provides access to unlimited study materials established by various experts.
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, despite strict lockdown and travel restrictions during the pandemic of Covid-19, the schools and colleges were able to function smoothly due to the option of online classes.
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, the experience one receives from educational institutions is way qualitative than online studies.
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 to say, at the universities a student can learn from the expertise of the lecturers as well as from classroom interactions among fellow classmates.
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, during my MBA course at college, my teachers used to share their professional views on various topics which helped in understanding the subject.
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, during the class, many students used to ask questions which were sometimes beyond my perception. To conclude, even though the internet has been of substantial help for the tutees, the courses completed at the colleges are more significant as they achieved under intense learning environment and
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 under the guidance of professional tutors.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • flexibility
  • convenience
  • accessibility
  • self-discipline
  • motivation
  • interaction
  • networking
  • resources
  • facilities
  • extracurricular activities
  • geographical limitations
  • financial constraints
  • personal growth
  • academic learning
  • face-to-face
  • online learning
  • traditional university settings
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