We live in a world of technology these days. While the internet brings with it clear advantages, the problems in terms of control and security of information outweighs the advantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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To conclude,
more
easier as a task can be completed immediately and accurate. Change the word
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An adoption
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nternet deliver so many benefits. Add an article
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Hence
, I strongly agree that the usage of the Internet
is able to provide advantages.
The Internet
had provides s
ubstantial benefit because the information searching become fast and precise. Add an article
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For instance
, typically a
university students require to use Correct the article-noun agreement
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also
help people
to conducted online meeting and online call. These approaches help people
to manage a meeting without physically attend to
a meeting location. Verify preposition usage
apply
For example
, the use of application widely known as google meeting help people
meet
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meets
via
online. Verify preposition usage
apply
Besides
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mergence of online shopping. Add an article
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sells
provide
more items to select and compare than a physical shop. Change the verb form
provides
This
help people
to acquire many options to purchase and execute price comparison.
On the other hand
, the internet
allows people
to browse news from other countries which make people
aware about
the current situation in that country. Verify preposition usage
of
For instance
, state election and financial status. The usage of the internet
lead
to the emergence of e-sport Change the verb form
leads
such
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as
people
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regardless of location. In addition
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the
people
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hunters
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