We live in a world of technology these days. While the internet brings with it clear advantages, the problems in terms of control and security of information outweighs the advantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The use of technology helps us to work
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easier as a task can be completed immediately and accurate.
An adoption
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of technology like
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nternet deliver so many benefits.
Hence
, I strongly agree that the usage of the
Internet
is able to provide advantages. The
Internet
had provides
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ubstantial benefit because the information searching become fast and precise.
For instance
, typically
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university students require to use
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nternet to find
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nswer for their assignments and without the usage of the
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the students may not able to obtain the best possible answer for their assignments.
In addition
,
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nternet not only regards to find answer it
also
help
people
to conducted online meeting and online call. These approaches help
people
to manage a meeting without physically attend
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a meeting location.
For example
, the use of application widely known as google meeting help
people
meet
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via
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online.
Besides
that, the
Internet
lead
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to
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mergence of online shopping.
The online
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shopping
sell
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everything that
provide
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more items to select and compare than a physical shop.
This
help
people
to acquire many options to purchase and execute price comparison.
On the other hand
, the
internet
allows
people
to browse news from other countries which make
people
aware
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the current situation in that country.
For instance
, state election and financial status. The usage of the
internet
lead
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to the emergence of e-sport
such
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mobile legend, which make
people
to plays with many
people
regardless of location.
In addition
,
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nternet help
people
to acquire online education. Nowadays online education became a new norm for
people
to obtain knowledge compare than
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meeting.
This
platform opted by many knowledge
hunter
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due to it is
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fast and easy to learn
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compare than the traditional approach. To conclude,
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nternet has many advantages as it
help
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people
to gain stuff and information much easier. In future, it is expected that the
Internet
help
people
to obtain many benefits from
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ifferent type of angle.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global connectivity
  • digital banking
  • cybersecurity
  • data protection
  • security breaches
  • cyber attacks
  • online transactions
  • digital divide
  • surveillance
  • freedom of information
  • responsible usage
  • ethical considerations
  • digital footprints
  • online behavior
  • information inequality
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