Some governments spend a lot of public money training up individuals to be successful in international sporting events. Some people believe that this money should be spent on things that will benefit the general public instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Sports

are an integral part of human life. Authorities train

sports

players using

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ublic budget and spend a lot on

sports

events. Some individuals argue that

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overnment should think about public and should spend

money

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people

's benefits. I agree with the public view to

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ull extent and will discuss in

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essay.

Firstly

,

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overnment should think about the whole nation and should use the budget on some important factors

such

as

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ducation of poor

people

. These days there are many individuals who are under the poverty line and they cannot afford

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their education.

This

tendency can lead to a negative impact

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society. Illiteracy rate can be increased which can

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hole economy in a negative way. To Illustrate,

people

pay a lot of taxes every year, so it is public

money

,

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overnment should return it to

people

to benefit them

such

as paying school fee of poor children.

Secondly

, authorities should use public

money

to build a library in

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public places. It can help

people

in two ways

such

as many

people

can find jobs in

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ibrary, related to computer or guiding

people

and

also

it is a good achievement for

people

who can get access to different books which they may need for their leisure time or for their study or career.

Moreover

, building factories and other businesses will help

people

to find jobs.

Government

spend

money

to train

sports

players, help them win

sports

events which is very good for the nation's fame.

For example

Olympic games, authorities pay huge to train them so that players can

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country's status by winning.

Moreover

,

government

pay millions of dollars only for entertainment purposes. Winning gold medals does not help

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ountry's development. In conclusion,

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overnment should

first

think about the whole nation and should fulfil public needs

instead

of spending a lot on

sports

. It is great to pay on

sports

but public issues should not be undervalued because the development is based on the whole population of a country, not only based on

sports

and games.