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Some people think that arts (such as painting and music) do not improve people's life and, therefore, government should not spend money on it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some folk hold
this
 perception that
Art
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 a vital role in our activity.But on the opposite side,people disagree and says that it is a waste of wealth and time.So in
this
 easy,I will discuss both sides and clarify the benefits of
art
 to society.
First
 and foremost
art
 impact on individual growth.Many people have a hobby
of
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 craft.When they do paintings they feel more peaceful and fulfil in their soul.Some of them
also
 choose craft as a profession.
Moreover
,it is a stress buster for millions of population.Because
this
 is the best way of enjoyment.
Additionally
,some community think that with music,we can
also
 heal many killing diseases like depression.Apart from
this
 today world,every person is busy in their life it
also
 plays the role of a friend.
For example
 according to Indian magazine in metropolis cities 70%
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youth like to spend time
on
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listening to music
instead
 of going out.
Secondly
,It is a mirror of every nation.Through their profession,we can judge their personality attitudes.
That is
 the main reason the government spend a huge junk of money on
art
 ,
such
 as painting exhibition and music concerts.
For instance
,
w
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estern crowd love Indian
art
 and culture.Every year many
tourist
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 visit India to see or feel it.That makes us proud to be Indian.
On the other hand
,other
society
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 hold
this
 opine that
art
 is useless.The government should not spend capital on it.They should use that money to resolve other problems like unemployment,environment. In conclusion, I fully support
art
.It is our culture and our history we should promote and preserve it.
Moreover
,it gives us relief from our daily hectic schedule.
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