In the future, more people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday. Do you agree or disagree?

In

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today's

world, it is believed by some part of a population that people are likely to

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travel

withing their country's

broaders

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broader

boarders

and not go abroad on

holidays

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. I disagree with

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opinion since,

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, human beings are always interested in different

cultures

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and

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their traditions

and,

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, foreign regions might have better facilities

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their home country.

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of all, on the one hand, when travelling abroad humans learn about other

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and have a chance to investigate a lot and expand their

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knowledge

. The main reason for

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is that new various

societites

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societies

have their own traditional food, events, languages and, not only is it entertaining for

travallers

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travellers

but

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it is knowledgeable and might change their perception of

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world.

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, it is valuable for the majority to have an opportunity to visit foreign regions and immerse in different

cultures

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since it gives them a new experience.

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recent research has shown that the major part, namely 85%, of young people desire to

travell

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travel

all over the world in order to speak with people and learn about the Earth.

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,

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to knowledge received from travelling the main reason for

prefering

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preferring

to go on

golidays

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holidays

holiday

somewhere else but your local region is that there might not be all needed facilities and natural places.

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is because not only does the majority of countries differ in the regard to their climate but

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some of them do not obtain

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infrastructure

adjusted for

holidays

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,

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, it might be inconvenient for vacationers to

travell

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travel

within their country, namely, if it is located somewhere on the north and they are willing to swim in the sea.

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the situation with the Covid 19 and closed boundaries citizens are still trying to find any possible ways to go

abroas

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abroad

since they

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from sitting at home. To conclude, I do not agree with the statement that more humans will

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to stay at their local are for

holidays

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since

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of all, they are likely t

odesire

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desire

to learn about different

cultures

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and

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, there might not be a crucial for

holidays

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infrustructure

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infrastructure

in their

mother land

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.