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You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letter Explain why you have moved Describe the new house Invite your friend to come and visit

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Dear Leena, How are you? Hope you are doing well. I writing
this
 letter to let you know that we have moved to our new bigger apartment. We just could not go on in
two-bedroom
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a two-bedroom
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 apartment now, that the children are growing up and they need more place. I am sure that you will love
this
. We have three bedrooms now and two balconies. Bedrooms are more spacious and it comes with a spacious bathroom and modular kitchen. The kids are very happy because there is a big size living room and
outside
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an outside
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 garden. But Kailash is perhaps the happiest of all, as the house is near to his office. Why don't you come round
this
 weekend and see what you think about our new place? We would all love to see you. Let me know when you can come so that we can plan the barbeque party in the garden if the weather is good. Our new address and phone number are given below, give us a call and let us know when we expect you. Lots of love, Surekha
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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