In the last few decades there have been more and more cases of famous people being hounded by the press. Some people think that famous people in the media have no right to privacy. To what extant do you agree?
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ast couple of year, Change the article
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media
hound the plethora of famous personalities. Many people
have an opinion that the
popular persons have no personal life. Remove the article
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However
, in my point of view, I am partially agree
with Change the verb form
partially agree
this
statement because some time famous people
also
perform some public stunt to become more famous.
To begin
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In addition
, television media
and newspapers run on the TRP. As a result
, they are usually seeking lucrative news that attract
the viewers for that famous Change the verb form
attracts
people
are an
easy prey for them. Remove the article
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For example
, they run or print such
a news
that XYZ actor has affair with any celebrities, XYZ Remove the article
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a piece of news
people
enjoying vacations etc… In certain scenario, the famous personalities feel that their privacy is being threatened by the
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their reputation and fame because of the blunder of the press.
On the other side, it is often noticed that some politicians and celebrities come in Correct your spelling
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ress and disclose their competitor’s weakness and violates their life. Add an article
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For instance
, before the election time, politicians attack on
the Remove the preposition
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opponent
candidates and ruin their personal lives. Replace the word
opposition
Thus
, famous people
are often facing a heard
time because of their opponent. Correct your spelling
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However
, it is often noticed that,
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people
want to reveal their personal information to become a
popular. Change the article
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For example
, people
often share their wealth in media
and make themselves debatable.
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olo culprit of disclosing any famous Add an article
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people
’s life. Personalities by their own and their opponent are also
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