In the last few decades there have been more and more cases of famous people being hounded by the press. Some people think that famous people in the media have no right to privacy. To what extant do you agree?

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plays a critical role in any country’s endeavour. Since

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ast couple of year,

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hound the plethora of famous personalities. Many

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have an opinion that

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popular persons have no personal life.

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statement because some time famous

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also

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perform some public stunt to become more famous.

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with, social

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has a great influence

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the common citizen of any country.

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, television

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and newspapers run on the TRP.

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, they are usually seeking lucrative news that

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the viewers for that famous

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easy prey for them.

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, they run or print

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a news

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that XYZ actor has affair with any celebrities, XYZ

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enjoying vacations etc… In certain scenario, the famous personalities feel that their privacy is being threatened by

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their reputation and fame because of the blunder of the press. On the other side, it is often noticed that some politicians and celebrities come in

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ress and disclose their competitor’s weakness and violates their life.

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, before the election time, politicians attack

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candidates and ruin their personal lives.

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, famous

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are often facing a

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time because of their opponent.

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, it is often noticed that

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people

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want to reveal their personal information to become

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popular.

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people

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often share their wealth in

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and make themselves debatable. To conclude, in my opinion,

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ress is not

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olo culprit of disclosing any famous

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’s life. Personalities by their own and their opponent are

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part of it.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

279 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

hounded
sensational news
unwarranted scrutiny
blurs the line
public interest
pervasive
public persona
complex relationship
invasive
ethical frameworks
privacy is upheld

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