In the last few decades there have been more and more cases of famous people being hounded by the press. Some people think that famous people in the media have no right to privacy. To what extant do you agree?

Media
plays a critical role in any country’s endeavour. Since
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ast couple of year,
media
hound the plethora of famous personalities. Many
people
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popular persons have no personal life.
However
, in my point of view, I
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with
this
statement because some time famous
people
also
perform some public stunt to become more famous.
To begin
with, social
media
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the common citizen of any country.
In addition
, television
media
and newspapers run on the TRP.
As a result
, they are usually seeking lucrative news that
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the viewers for that famous
people
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easy prey for them.
For example
, they run or print
such
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that XYZ actor has affair with any celebrities, XYZ
people
enjoying vacations etc… In certain scenario, the famous personalities feel that their privacy is being threatened by
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social
media
.
Moreover
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their reputation and fame because of the blunder of the press. On the other side, it is often noticed that some politicians and celebrities come in
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ress and disclose their competitor’s weakness and violates their life.
For instance
, before the election time, politicians attack
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the
opponent
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candidates and ruin their personal lives.
Thus
, famous
people
are often facing a
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time because of their opponent.
However
, it is often noticed that
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people
want to reveal their personal information to become
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popular.
For example
,
people
often share their wealth in
media
and make themselves debatable. To conclude, in my opinion,
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ress is not
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olo culprit of disclosing any famous
people
’s life. Personalities by their own and their opponent are
also
part of it.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • hounded
  • sensational news
  • unwarranted scrutiny
  • blurs the line
  • public interest
  • pervasive
  • public persona
  • complex relationship
  • invasive
  • ethical frameworks
  • privacy is upheld
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