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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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People who decide to move and live in a
country
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 which does not share the same native
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 as
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 usually face obstacles to communicate properly and to solve daily
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 and tasks.
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 can cause serious social and practical
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 and will point out some of
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those
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problems
 in the
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 paragraphs. To start with, it is important to say that efficient communication requires the acknowledgement of cultural and social context.
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, when someone moves to a different
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, there is an enormous probability for them to miss that social context.
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, those people might face serious
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 to connect with natives and create a meaningful relationship with them.
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,
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differences
 in mutual events that happen in childhood - cartoons and tv shows
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 create a barrier to social connection. It is
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 important to point out that the majority of people who move to a different
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 do not manage the whole aspects of the new
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 and might have
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 with specific vocabularies. To illustrate that, practical issues
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 with their car to a mechanic or trying to buy a specific tool to fix the toilet,
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, might be even harder if they are not able to communicate properly. A study published by Carnegie Melon College showed that one of the biggest reasons that make foreigners go back to their countries is the difficulty to
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adapt
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. To conclude, there is a lot of
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 in a
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 which does not share someone's native
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. Those obstacles could reflect not only in social distance but
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 practical
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 for foreigners.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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