Some people say that Too much time And resources are spent on the protection of wild animals and birds. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is irrefutable that human
relation
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with
animals
and
birds
is very close.A segment of the society believes that wild
animals
and
birds
are good resources to science experiment for us.
however
,
other opinion
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another opinion
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that
animals
and
birds
are harmful
for
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society. I would discuss both
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in the upcoming paragraph.
To begin
with, wild
animals
and
birds
are undomestic and living in forests. A few years ago,men Hunted the wild
animals
and
birds
because they killed and eat them. now in
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odern era, both are used for in Medical Research. The scientist discovers new drugs to do an experiment on them. some of
animals
and
birds
eat insects it helps to do
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lean environment. Various individual wild
birds
are kept to sell them as
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et in the market. it is the source of income. Some human beings to selling as meat,and
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create
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ealth problem.
for instance
by blood pressure Breast cancer Because high cholesterol
are
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found in them.
Moreover
, other opinions that wild
birds
and
animals
to spoil the crops and they
also
eat to the human being Due to these people are against them and want to kill them. These wild
animals
and
birds
are dangerous but some people believe that they are very loyal and helpful for us.
for instance
, in zoos keep the wild
animals
and
birds
to educate children's enjoy learning about them.
hence
,we should not be killed . In conclusion, after analysing the above statement
although
, wild
animals
and
birds
to keep save the environment
also
the government should be taken an action on those individuals who killed them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Biodiversity
  • Intrinsic value
  • Ecological balance
  • Conservation efforts
  • Endangered species
  • Sustainable resource management
  • Habitat preservation
  • Eco-tourism
  • Job creation
  • Ethical considerations
  • Allocated resources
  • Poverty alleviation
  • Educational initiatives
  • Future generations
  • Wildlife protection
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