Some people say that Too much time And resources are spent on the protection of wild animals and birds. to what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is irrefutable that human
relation
with Replace the word
relationships
animals
and birds
is very close.A segment of the society believes that wild animals
and birds
are good resources to science experiment for us. however
, other opinion
that Change the wording
another opinion
other opinions
animals
and birds
are harmful for
society. I would discuss both Change the preposition
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statement
in the upcoming paragraph.
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statements
To begin
with, wild animals
and birds
are undomestic and living in forests. A few years ago,men Hunted the wild animals
and birds
because they killed and eat them. now in M
odern era, both are used for in Medical Research. The scientist discovers new drugs to do an experiment on them. some of Add an article
the
animals
and birds
eat insects it helps to do c
lean environment. Various individual wild Add an article
a
birds
are kept to sell them as p
et in the market. it is the source of income. Some human beings to selling as meat,and Add an article
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its
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h
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for instance
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Moreover
, other opinions that wild birds
and animals
to spoil the crops and they also
eat to the human being Due to these people are against them and want to kill them. These wild animals
and birds
are dangerous but some people believe that they are very loyal and helpful for us. for instance
, in zoos keep the wild animals
and birds
to educate children's enjoy learning about them.hence
,we should not be killed .
In conclusion, after analysing the above statement although
, wild animals
and birds
to keep save the environment also
the government should be taken an action on those individuals who killed them.Submitted by naresh on
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