Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

While a number of individuals opine that imprisonment for long periods is the prime way of decreasing offences, others think different actions will be more appropriate in
this
case. In my opinion,
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ate of violence could be dropped with imposing proper laws and
lagislations
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legislations
legislation
considering some aspects
instead
of just imposing longer sentences;
however
, both views will be discussed. On the one hand, longer prison sentences will refrain the criminals to commit
crimes
again. If
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offenders
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jail for
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aximum time, they will not be able to associate them doing
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ame work.
Besides
, these wrongdoers can not create groups and inspire others to do mischiefs.
Moreover
, general people might refrain them to do these acts with the fear of receiving
such
hard punishment afterwards.
Consequently
, the percentage of offences will get down.
For example
, in Bangladesh,
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ape case drastically dropped after stating the imprisonment if
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accused
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involvement is proved.
Nevertheless
, suitable steps regarding the offences will be impactful to minimize these acts. Not every
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equally brutal and
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committed
in the common situation;
therefore
, it would not be justified to put
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ame
penanlty
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penalty
for all these.
Furthermore
, if the common punishment, like lifetime
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imprisonment
is given to all the criminals that will create chaos and unrest in the society
instead
of reducing
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violence
acts of violence
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violences
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violence
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.
Hence
, it would be more effective to punish wrongdoers by taking
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certain things into the account,
such
as the circumstance, age of the criminal, stage of the blunder and so on. Considering
such
issues will not only aware people to retain them do
crimes
but
also
gradually decrease the percentage of
this
. In conclusion, humans have contrasting views whether the maximum imprisonment or other steps will be helpful for
decling
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declining
dealing
the rate of
crimes
. I believe, the different actions
instead
of
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will be more effective to do so.
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