am writing this letter to seek your attention towards Mr. Alan, one of your employees at the Indira Gandhi International Airport, who helped me at t

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter to seek your attention towards

Mr.

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Alan, one of your

employees

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at the Indira Gandhi International

Airport

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, who helped me at the

airport

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of all, I would like to inform you about the problem faced by me at the

airport

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. After clearing the security

check up

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area at the

airport

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, unfortunately, I forget to pick

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handbag

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hand

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handbag

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bag

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. I realised

about

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this

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when I was about to board the aeroplane. Owing to

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problem, I informed the

employees

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who were checking boarding passes. They forwarded

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issue to the staff working in the security checkup area so that

bag

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can be located. As soon as Mr Alan knew about the lost

bag

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, he started to find the

bag

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. Due to his fast reaction to the problem,

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bag

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was founded and delivered to me before the departure of the flight. I want to request you that he should be praised in front of all the

employees

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so that he can feel proud

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his work. Apart from

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, some

reward

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can be given to him like declaring him the employee of the month.

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can

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encourage other

employees

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to perform

such

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acts. Hope you will recognise his efforts and praise him

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. Yours sincerely Alex Mathew

harkiratsingh.tuTue Feb 02 2021

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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8 paragraphs

215 words

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