Students perform better in school when they are rewarded rather than when they are punished. To what extent do you agree or disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the light of a new law that was introduced

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ew years back, which says physically punishing children is a criminal offence, people are putting forward their best argument for and against it. We can

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that students

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well in their

life

when they are confident about themselves, which in turn comes from rewarding and not from punishing them. While we can say that rewarding a

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is necessary, but

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them. Rewarding does not have to be a gift or a material; it can be a verbal appreciation. When a

student

is rewarded for their achievement, he\she feel a boost of confidence in themselves.

This

little gesture makes them feel good about themselves. Handling studies and real-

life

problems can be depressing for a

student

, so

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is a responsibility of every adult related to the

student

to boost their morale

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and make them feel connected and less anxious. When a

student

receives

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confidence and support from others for his\her work, he\she becomes more determined and more dedicated to their work, which are important ingredients of success recipe.

However

, too much relaxation and too much appreciation can make them

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about their work and build their ego, which in turn is not good for anybody.

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should learn and understand the importance of discipline in his

life

.

Moreover

, if we reward students all the time, they will not understand the meaning of failure or loss in their

life

.

Therefore

, to make them disciplined in

life

, sometimes we need to punish them as well.

This

is turn will encourage them to do better

next

time to not be punished. In conclusion, I would like to say that, while it

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necessary to reward and encourage a

student

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etterment of his

life

, punishment is

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required in between to make them disciplined and not turn them overconfident,

consequently

, disrupt them from achieving success in

life

. We adult, who are connected to them, need to perform

this

crucial responsibility to understand when they need to be rewarded and when they need to be punished.