It is a commonly held belief that the death penalty is a good deterrent to prevent heinous crimes. However, others believe that life long sentences is a better deterrent. Discuss both views.

Nowadays,
people
are divided on the basis of criminal
punishment
. Many
people
believe that
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eath
penalty
is good deterrent while
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others think that lifetime sentencing is
also
better. I,
however
, discuss both the views in
this
essay.
Firstly
,
punishment
should vary as per age, gender and circumstances under which
crime
committed.
punishment
should be as possible as strict so,
people
can think
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housand times before doing it.
Moreover
, due to wrong decisions, many
people
suffer badly. The
death
penalty
is not
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deal
punishment
for the criminal. But, for heinous
crime
such
as murder and rape
death
penalty
should be given. on the other side, for a petty
crime
, many government institutes are there for rehabilitation.
Secondly
, to run the rehabilitation and jail for prisoners is costly in terms of food, safety, etc. It is hard to manage all those things for the government.
For example
, Kasab the terrorist, who was condemned as he was charged with the notorious terrorist attack on
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in Mumbai. For, their security and safety authorities spend14 crore as per IDC news. Post decision and judicial killing is leading to
lessens
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the Expenses. There are
people
who are
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erennial nuisance to the society punishments , say
for Example
serial killers, rapists and terrorists For them, the
death
penalty
is a good deterrent. In conclusion, there are advantages and disadvantages
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the
death
penalty
and long sentences. It totally depends on the mode of
crime
and it is
also
an alarming condition for the government to reduce the
crime
rate.
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