It is a commonly held belief that the death penalty is a good deterrent to prevent heinous crimes. However, others believe that life long sentences is a better deterrent. Discuss both views.
Nowadays,
people
are divided on the basis of criminal punishment
. Many people
believe that d
eath Add an article
the
penalty
is good deterrent while,
others think that lifetime sentencing is Remove the comma
apply
also
better. I, however
, discuss both the views in this
essay.
Firstly
, punishment
should vary as per age, gender and circumstances under which crime
committed. punishment
should be as possible as strict so, people
can think t
housand times before doing it. Add an article
a
Moreover
, due to wrong decisions, many people
suffer badly. The death
penalty
is not i
deal Add an article
an
punishment
for the criminal. But, for heinous crime
such
as murder and rape death
penalty
should be given. on the other side, for a petty crime
, many government institutes are there for rehabilitation.
Secondly
, to run the rehabilitation and jail for prisoners is costly in terms of food, safety, etc. It is hard to manage all those things for the government. For example
, Kasab the terrorist, who was condemned as he was charged with the notorious terrorist attack on T
aj Add an article
the
hotel
in Mumbai. For, their security and safety authorities spend14 crore as per IDC news. Post decision and judicial killing is leading to Change the capitalization
Hotel
lessens
the Expenses. There are Change the verb form
lessen
people
who are p
erennial nuisance to the society punishments , say Add an article
a
for Example
serial killers, rapists and terrorists For them, the death
penalty
is a good deterrent.
In conclusion, there are advantages and disadvantages of
the Verify preposition usage
to
death
penalty
and long sentences. It totally depends on the mode of crime
and it is also
an alarming condition for the government to reduce the crime
rate.Submitted by JIGISHA on
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