You have bought furniture from a store. When you received, there were some damages. Write a letter to the concerned store manager. In your letter, you should: Give information about the furniture. Explain the damage Ask the manager to solve your issue.

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Dear Sir, I am writing express an illustration about why the furniture I bought from you store was damaged after receiving. Beginning with

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situation accrued, there are some facts that I want to tell you.

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Saturday I bought a desk with white in your store for my home decoration, and you promised to deliver it to my house for free at 5 pm on the same day, but when I opened the package and checked, I found that some of the paint on its legs had fallen, Especially

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light

color

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looks very noticeable. At

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moment, I have no use for

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desk,

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I hope to return the item

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the online refund rules to return the goods and receive reimbursement.

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, I will be at home all day

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Sunday, I will pack and wait for the courier to come. I look forward to hearing from you, and if you need any

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information, please do not hesitate to contact me, as I am pleased to supply it. Yours faithfully, Xiyue Tang

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structure

Keep paragraphs well-organized with a clear beginning, middle, and end to enhance clarity and impact.

grammar/style

Review for minor grammatical errors and refine your choice of words for better precision and professionalism.

tone

Ensure your closing statement is polite yet assertive, clearly indicating your anticipation of a resolution.

content

The letter was successful in describing the issue with the furniture and requesting a specific resolution.

structure

Your introductory greeting was polite, and the overall structure of the letter made your points easy to follow.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

177 words

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