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Some people think it's better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. other people believe it's good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

#people #friends
It is irrefutable that every person has its own quality in their
life
. A segment of the society believes that always choose those
friends
 who stands with them in every situation.
however
, other opinion that every
friends
 have not same characterize like as you. I would discuss the both statement in the upcoming paragraph.
To begin
 with, every individual has a best friend and can share every kinds of thoughts with them. we can enjoy a all movement with them and we can understand each other very easily. they help us in bad situation when I will have faced some
problem
 in anywhere. we can run a business together and share every product. meanwhile, we can face all types of
problem
 with each other. these kinds of
friends
 we can go anywhere ,and we can trust easily shares every
life
problem
. like: study related, family matter and others.
Moreover
, other opinion that these kinds of
friends
 sometime argue with us as they interrupt us when we talk against them.
for instance
, every coin has two sides both side are different image and his on quality like same as a friend. I think these
friends
 have its own importance in our
life
furthermore
,
this
friends
 criticize and help me to solve the problems. In conclusion, we analysis the above statement
although
, every individual has a friend in their
life
 but we should be make those
friends
 we can trust a lot and who don't share our
problem
 with others.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • bond
  • support
  • unconditional love
  • shared values
  • mutual understanding
  • trust
  • emotional well-being
  • interdependence
  • societal norms
  • companionship
  • loyalty
  • advice
  • experiences
  • mentorship
  • trustworthy
  • reliable
  • reliable
  • cherish
  • strengthen
  • deepen
  • attach importance to
  • prioritize
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