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In some countries, most people prefer to rent their homes rather than buying them.what are advantages and disadvantages of renting a home.

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In recent years the number of
people
 is increasing in many nations to live in rental accommodation
Instead
 of buying a
house
.
This
 essay will not only discuss the benefits of associated with
this
 trend but its drawback will
also
 be highlighted. Despite the drawbacks below, there are more noticeable benefits which support renting a
house
. One of them is that many jobs seeker who migrate from their hometown to metropolitan.
This
 is due to individuals have to rent a flat or
house
 because they do not want to settle permanently where they will go for jobs.
For example
, in India, many
people
 can live in rental properties in order to reside in a megacities span of time.
Moreover
, buying a new
house
 as a difficulty for middle-class citizens because of their price.
Therefore
, many masses can take houses on a lease rather than buying on a loan.
For instance
, If they buy a
house
 on a loan, it will adversely affect their monthly budget which they will invest in a stock market or fixed deposit and take a profit.
On the other hand
, there are some downsides as well. A frequent criticism about a subject is that rental
house
 cannot be satisfied with our emotions the same as our
house
. To elaborate, These
people
 had their own
house
, they may build the
house
 as per preference.
In addition
, another demotivating feature to be considered is Paying a monthly rent which will affect the
people
 saving. Owing to a monthly payment for accommodation,
People
 are sacrificed recreational activity which they will enjoy with their children. In conclusion, from
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 discussion,it can be concluded that renting a
house
 has both positive and negative aspect as well.
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