Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done about lack of sleep?

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
There is an ever-decreasing trend of sleeping hours during a day among many
population
Change to a plural noun
populations
show examples
.
This
Linking Words
essay will
explores
Change the verb form
explore
show examples
some problems and probable solutions for
this
Linking Words
topic in details.
To begin
Linking Words
with, today’s car-borne lifestyle leads to increasing problems which may
affects
Change the verb form
affect
show examples
important matters
such
Linking Words
as sleeping.
This
Linking Words
problem
is remained
Change to the active voice
remains
has remained
show examples
even though numerous research
have
Change the verb form
has
show examples
been done on
this
Linking Words
subject from some years ago. But growing rates of obesity and nervousness are two identified issues in several communities.
In addition
Linking Words
, after root-cause analysis in some hard diseases, the underlying reason was
s
Add an article
the
a
show examples
hortage of sleeping.
On the contrary
Linking Words
, enough sleeping may result in better digestion and helping
people
Use synonyms
to recover their mental concerns after long hours of working or education.
Therefore
Linking Words
, some special clinics call “sleeping clinic” have been established in order to improve the quality of
sleeping
Change the form of the verb
sleep
show examples
.
Moreover
Linking Words
, not only can these clinics or other corrective actions make improvements in sleeping, but
also
Linking Words
some preventive measures should be done.
For instance
Linking Words
, placing an additional tax on extra working hours by governments may prevent staffs to stay at
o
Add an article
the
show examples
ffice until night.
Furthermore
Linking Words
, setting a strict rule by
people
Use synonyms
not to use their smartphones one hour before sleeping can obviously reduce
u
Add an article
the
show examples
nsuitable effects of mobile’s rays and help
people
Use synonyms
to get sleep sooner. The other solutions might be observing a balanced diet and regular exercises that can enhance the quality and duration of sleeping time. To conclude, neither governments nor
people
Use synonyms
cannot solely eliminate
the
Remove the article
apply
show examples
sleeping problems. Both sides should simultaneously do action in preventive or corrective forms in order to eradicate underlying issues.
Submitted by suna.habibi on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • Insomnia
  • Sleep deprivation
  • Sleep disorders
  • Sleep quality
  • Fatigue
  • Exhaustion
  • Restless
  • Restorative sleep
  • REM sleep
  • Circadian rhythm
  • Sleep hygiene
  • Napping
  • Sleep duration
  • Melatonin
  • Sleep-inducing
  • Drowsiness
  • Sleep disturbances
  • Obstructive sleep apnea
  • Snoring
  • Sleepwalking
  • Sleep talking
  • Shift work
  • Sleeping pills
  • Sleep aid
  • Relaxation techniques
  • Meditation
  • Deep breathing
What to do next:
Look at other essays: