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nchester, I booked a taxi from this place to high street through your mobile application. Car number was MC 6547 which was acknowledged in the confirmation message.

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I am writing
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 letter to raise my concern about regarding poor
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 of one of your taxi. A Few days ago, on 31 January 2021 in the evening, after watching a football match at
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 Trafford football stadium Manchester, I booked a taxi from
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 place to high street through your mobile application.
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 number was MC 6547 which was acknowledged in the confirmation message. I would like to inform you that the experience of
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 cab
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 was terrible.
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 of all, the blower of the
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 was faulty owing to which I felt too cold during my journey. Apart from
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,
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car
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 was smelling foul from inside since it was not neat and clean. As
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 cab
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 has a great reputation in the city, necessary action should be taken by the company to maintain its standards.
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 situation can be avoided by increasing the frequency of
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 inspection so that drivers can repair the services provided in the
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 timely.
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, cleanliness of the vehicle should be checked daily in the morning which can improve the hygienic conditions of the cabs. Hope
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 would be improved in the future.
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