A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination. Write a letter to your friend and recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited before.Say -where you went, -Where you stayed, -What you can do there and what the food was like.

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Dear Sarah, Thanks for your letter. I am really happy that you

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thought out of the box to have lovely vacations with family apart from

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intense life. I

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put forward an idea to visit India as you are a keen explorer.

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year, I planned a tour to northern India specifically Punjab and I am extremely amused by the local culture and taste. I feel privileged and overwhelmed to visit

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place, The Golden Temple in Amritsar. You can find 5-star to 7-star hotels in the city but I personally prefer staying inside in circumambulate to enjoy the night view of the holy building. On the outskirts of the city, there is an Indo-Pak Wagah border. Local Rides are available to reach the place and enjoy the view of the evening ceremony.

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city has a prevalent dish called Kulche chole. You can

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buy

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footwears

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and dresses from the local market. I ensure you will never regret visiting

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place

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and will remember

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your entire lifespan. Feel free to pen down anytime to me for

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suggestions. Have a safe and cheerful journey. Best Wishes, Harpreet

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

193 words

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