People think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others believe that there are other alternative solutions for reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion on this topic.

Individuals believe that a better way to minimise the

crime

rate is to provide maximum

prison

punishment

whilst,

other

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others

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argue that there are other ways.

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essay presents that long jail

stay

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stays

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punishment

is the better option and how increasing

police

patrolling is not valid

arguement

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argument

with a reasoned conclusion.

Firstly

, if

government

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the government

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allows the court to give

higher

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a higher

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number of years in

prison

as a

punishment

for

crimes

will be a good message in the country.

This

will allow the criminals to realise their mistake for breaking the law and they do not commit

crime

after completing their

time

in jail.

Similarly

,

this

can provide a general message in the city that the consequences of

comitting

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committing

a

crime

is

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not easy and they will fear to commit the

crime

.

Thus

, the number of

cime

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times

is reduced

in

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average.

For example

, according to The China

times

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newspaper, after China passed a

legistation

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legislation

that

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apply

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that can give higher years of

prison

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a prison

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sentence for

crimes

, the number of

crimes

has decreased dramatically.

On the other hand

, many say that increasing the patrolling of

police

will reduce the

amount

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of

crimes

in the city. Regular routine patrolling by

police

vehicles will create a fear in offenders of getting caught so they do not

comit

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commit

a

crime

. Despite

this

, the

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criminal-minded

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criminal

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criminally

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minded individuals who are determined can plan

accordingly

to skip the

police

rounds, but if there is maximum

prison

punishment

law they will think

many

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time

before taking the law into their hands.

For example

, the people with

crime

intensions

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intentions

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can observe the pattern of

police

patrols and predict the exact

time

of

next

patrolling, so that they can have a window to commit a

crime

. In conclusion, citizens

argure

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argue

argued

that longer

prison

sentence can reduce

crime

, as

this

will send a clear picture of the consequences of breaking the laws,

however

, others think that high patrolling from

police

in the area

reduces

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reduce

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the

crime

.

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essay

believe

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that

sentincing

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sentencing

more years of

prison

time

will reduce the

crime

as it creates great fear in offenders to do a

crime

.