As a result of tourism and the increasing number of people travelling, there is a growing demand for more flights what problem does this have on the environment what measures could be taken to solve the problem

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abroad are a very popular choice nowadays , but sadly
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could have a negative impact on the environment
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pollution and global warming .
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, there are some possible solutions to tackle and overcome namely , the promotion of local
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as well as introducing pollution taxes for the travellers . Arguably ,
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pollution is one of the most concerning factors at the moment ,
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the numerous illnesses related to it . Asthma is one of the breathing difficulties caused by the gases found in the atmosphere according to the specialists .
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, the rate of the patients in the hospital showing symptoms of asthma has increased by 50
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in the
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century .
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climate change is endangering the population ,
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the increased demand for flights . Climate warming , in a few years time could affect the temperatures required to maintain the natural habitat for certain species , and as a
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result these would travel to the cities to find food resources . The solutions to overcome
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issues should be a priority for the bodies responsible to deal with it . Turning to the solutions , the most effective could be the introduction of taxes for the tourists who are taking more than one trip a year abroad .
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would be beneficial
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for the authorities
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because the funds could be used to improve other fields where financial support is not available . Another solution could be the promotional campaigns of the local places to attract tourists to spend their
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within the country .
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would benefit the local businesses as well as the economy of the country .
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, in a survey carried out by the Cotswold
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the participants explained that they prefer travelling to another country for relaxation
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because the local places are hard to be found on the internet and the details of the place are not accessible . In conclusion , the environment could be
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pollution-free and climate warming could be significantly reduced if the authorities are considering placing taxes for the
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travellers as well as encouraging local businesses to promote more their offers .
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